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~KNIGHT44~ New Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 6ohio |
When I was young and a short time had passed, I discovered I had a heart of glass. It was so beautiful that I kept it out for all to see, This marvelous glass heart was the real true me. The destructible winds of hate and fear, I realized too late had come far too near. Thet blew my glass heart clear out of my hands, It shattered and broke, spreading all over the land. I was horrified and depressed-for where had my glass heart gone? I looked over at a rock where a bog peice had laanded on. It was all I had left of my beautiful glass heart, Where oh where could I begin to re-start? I kept it hidden safely from all those who were close to me, I kept it so well hidden that no one could see the real true me. Can I ever dare to bring out my once-whole glass heart for all to enjoy? Or will it just be whipped away by those horrid winds that destroy. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Welcome to Passions! I'm glad that you decided to join our "family of friends". This is a really good poem. I love the story you've told here. Just remember, if you keep your heart hidden, it will never feel the sun. Keep up the good work! PS-Check your e-mail "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Wow, so powerfull i can tell ya this is a good poem you kinda sounded so calm in writing a piece that was so full of emotional stress good job ~Branden~ "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
awesome poem. i can feel it bleeding honesty and emotion. well penned. welcome to Passions. i hope you dig it here as much as i do. enjoy your stay Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions Great entrance post into passions! The poem seemed real, as the others said. I like how fragile you made your heart sound. Great job  I hope you enjoy it here, keep posting "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Welcome! This was a great first poem. I will be looking forward to future posts. Jon |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey! Welcome to Passions! I really liked this...like TONS! I've tried to write things about this topic, but they never seem to come out right..this was so great, keep it up and I can't wait to see more of your stuff!!~Carly A word is dead When it is said Some say, I say it just Begins to live That day. |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Hey there... Welcome! This is a great poem. Hearts are so easily broken when we aren't carefull enough. and then the aftermath of a heatbreak... not trusting anyone for a while. This was all well portrayed in a very creative way here in this poem... Thanks for sharing IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
KNIGHT44- Welcome to Passions! what a wonderful first post.. thanks for sharing this little piece of your heart with us.. i look forward to reading lots more from you. *smile*, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!! I know that you'll just love it here and your first post was absolutely amazing!! You have a lot of talent and i cant wait to see more!! Welcome!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked the title of this poem. Glass, easily shattered......yep yep. Welcome to passions, by the way!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
I thought I replied to this one already! Aaahh I'm such a bad sister!  Lol anyways, I love this poem...every time I read it, it gets to me even more! I'm glad you decided to make this your first post - its a good representation of you. Hope things get better for you hun and if you ever need anything you know where to reach me Love you lots ur lil sister Kris ~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~ ~Won't you come and hold my hand? This world has taken me as far as it can... w |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Welcome to passions!!!I hope that you enjoy it here just as much as I do. Amazing first post. I hope that I see more work by you.  People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I thought it was quite delightful =) *uhhh not really good at compliments* But I do try, honestly I loved it, and welcome of course I can't wait to read more of your poems, it's something to look forward to =) ~Dance your cares away, worries for another day, let the music play down at fraggle rock..~ (uhh tell me if I got that wrong, I really don't know the whole song off the top of my head =Þ...) |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Welcome to passions! this was such an awesome first post! it seems that you have been writing for a long time! hope to read more Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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BaByGuRL Junior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 13 |
yo bro haha...i just had to tell you, this was the first poem of yours i ever read...u showed it to me a long time ago. it is so good and so true it totally relates to life. ya know i love ya luv bff ur lil sis |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
Welcome to Passions!! GREAT first post! I can totally relate to this poem.. it's expressed very well, great job!! Hope to read more of your posts in the future! Take care, Sarah with the unknown comes no expectations in this i find my peace |
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