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poem i wrote when i was 9 !!
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poem i wrote when i was 9 !! |
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vix616 Junior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 22 |
i wrote this poem when i was 10 bacause i had nobody else to turn to - that's another whole poem though DAISY She's always there for me through the worse and through the better to my thoughts she has the key (she's as careful as can be) when i moan and groan she's always there theres nothing like my Teddy Bear.. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I thought this was so cute. It brought a smile to my face. How long ago did you write this anyways??? People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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vix616 Junior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 22 |
Thanx Erin - i wrote the poem 6 years ago! still had it in my drawer along with many others.....  |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Just as i finished reading I choked on my coca-cola and went into random convulsions and blew snot out of my nose....*coughs while regaining composure*.....wow that completely sucked! Ok....enough *coughs* sharing..... *coughs*.... Ok anyway.......wow you wrote as a 10yr old? That's really cool....i've only been writing for 2 and a half years and have much to learn through my poetry. Anyway it's great to have you aboard the team of poets here. Expression is bliss.... *coughs*  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think this poem is excellent, I'm amazed that you say you wrote it when you were 10! Nice job, and lol at Dopey  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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