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A lover, A friend
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A lover, A friend |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
You were my 1st love we did everything together you held me, you hugged me, you kissed me you said "I love you Minna" I said "I love you too" but did I know a couple months later we'd be friends I said lets be friends you had pain inside you you had tears in your eyes you wanted me back. The next day I found out this you started talking beind my back you started telling people about I wasn't good. One day you called me worthless I was hurt I wanted to die I said what the ....? you smiled at me. Then when I tell you something that bothers me about you you don't come in school the next day I say to my friends what a loser. Are we friends if we are don't be mean Minna |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Minna, you express your feeling really well in this piece. It always hurts when someone you care for treats you like this. I hope that he sees what a jerk he is being and changes his ways. Keep up the good work! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
hey there hun...I really like the honesty and emotion in this poem...great job. Thanks for the chat earlier  Ur friend Kristin ~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~ ~Won't you come and hold my hand? This world has taken me as far as it can... wit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I hope he stops treating you like this and you can be friends. Good job on the poem "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker [URL=http://www.thehungersite.com]http://www |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well i mean c'mon........you dumped the guy. I think he has a right to be bitter and pissed off. I don't think he should have talked behind your back and i don't think you should have said mean things. But the dude has ALL THE RIGHT IN HIMSELF to hate your guts. It's his right...... I just hope this ends up ok and doesn't blow up.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
Yes I know he has every right to be pissed off but when he called me worthless! That hurt me, I sat there and had tears in my eyes. I told him it hurt and I forgave him, I always say "hey Dave" he says "hey Minna". He can be nice, but we still are good friends. Minna If I could walk I'd be glad..But I'm glad the way I am- ~*~me~*~ |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Minna, Minna, Minna what a great poem wow i like how you can just write that out to one paticular person. I LOVE IT. *Love always* ~Branden~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. [This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 11-25-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Minna~ Its hard to let go of someone you love, especially your first love. But things do change. You will eventually meet the person you want to spend the rest of your life with. Be happy with the decision you made. Dont ask me about my other post to this poem I dont know why it wont let me edit it. < !signature--> People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. [This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 11-25-2000).] |
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