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I Know that I Must Go On
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I Know that I Must Go On |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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I Know That I Must Go On: I know that I must go on. What else can I do? Beyond past thoughts of her. It was all that was true. I know that I must go on. Is there another way? Musing over memories. I took it day by day. I know that I must go on. How long will it take? Trying to but live my life, And see what I make. I know that I must go on. Could I ever see? To realize what truly is, And to fully be. I know that I must go on. Is it really fair? That I wither in hell Dying in a lions lair. I know that I must go on. I don't know where or how? I completely understand That the time to start is now.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey Javi. Great stuff you got here!! I really, really enjoyed it. Happy writing... ~Carly "I see," said the blind man to his deaf wife reading the newspaper. |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
~*~ Great poem, I really like it. Keep up the great work, I look forward to reading more from you. Luv, SweetStuff< !signature--> ~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~ [This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 10-17-2000).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
The style of this one just got me. I like how you repeated the first lines, the effect is really good. "I know that I must go on. I don't know where or how? I completely understand That the time to start is now." And there's that optomisim I always love to see  Great poetry!"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I was just going through my private library and had to bump this one, it's so good! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I'm really glad that Lake bumped this up. I can really relate to this. You know that you have to move on, but you aren't really sure how. You express your feeling really beautifully. I hope that you've figured things out now! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Let's just say......my love life is completely off-the-wall-WEIRD! anyway thanks lake and love for the replies! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Rhiannon Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 95Fayetteville, TN USA |
Loved this one you're not the only one that has trouble moving on....btw thanks for all the sweet responses!love, leslie The night is my companion The solitude my guide Would I spend forever here And not be satisfied? Sarah MacLachlan, "Possession" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Dopey~ It sounds like you know what you are gonna do. That you have your mind made up. As always this was really good. And I have to catch up on all the other poems I missed by you. |
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BaByGuRL Junior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 13 |
WOW! i have been reading some of your posts...they are all soo good i especially like this one...i can really relate to it. keep up the good work!luv~ BaByGuRL |
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