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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
In a minute, Or within a hour, Feel the rise, Feel the power, Many things are gifted to come, In which would make us number one, But just to leave and not say goodbye, Unlike you so I had to cry, Listen to my heart rip apart, As I judge my life like a wet fart. Good people live, Good people die, But we were beyond that by surprise. All the things that we have done, Which in my heart did make life fun, Of all the things we have been through, You can still know that I here for you, Fallen angels can laugh and play But the lost angel are the ones that always saves the day. The is written to my best friend scg I miss her more than she could ever really know. Girl I love your poems but you still scare me when you write in the depressed state!!!! STOP IT PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!! You are a happy girl think happy thought and fly geez Love is pure in it's top form, But with out romance love is not born |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. I loved this!! It was so..I don't know, good. hehe..Well great job, and stay cool...  ~Carly A word is dead When it is said Some say, I say it just Begins to live That day. |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Jay, Thanks alot my friend! This poem was excellent! And to think...you wrote it for me! You're so sweet! I miss you too! I'm in Chicago, Illinois now...I probably won't be back for a while! E-mail me your address, and I will keep in touch...K? Thanks again for the poem! I loved it! ~*~SCG~*~ |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Although I laughed when I read this... "Listen to my heart rip apart, As I judge my life like a wet fart." this was a very sweet poem. good work IsGona |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I love how you began this and the whole thing is really good, keep it up "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I'm going to have to completely agree with Isgona......hahaha ok  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
thanks everybody, it is good to be back, scg I am gald you liked it I miss you to ALOT!!! I was going to ask all of you how do you get a picture on this site. Love is pure in it's top form, But with out romance love is not born |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
hey scg check your collegeclub e-mail ok. Love is pure in it's top form, But with out romance love is not born |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
Great poem Jay!!! I miss my sis too  , But atleast she is e-mailing you. Gee I feel like a sap, I'm starting to cry!"Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
sorry sis, I haven't gotten to a computer in a while! I'll try to get here every now and then!  ~*~SCG~*~ |
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Author Unknown Member
since 2001-01-05
Posts 57Linn MO USA |
awesome poem, like it lots keep writin ya got the potential ;o) *dont let life bring you down, dig thru the ditches and deck it in the face and reclaim your place*----Kyle Finn......2001 |
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