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Sweet 16? |
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layla Member
since 2000-11-19
Posts 74 |
ITS QUITE DECIEVING- SWEET 16 THE NAME DOESN'T FIT FROM WUT I HAVE SEEN I CRY SOMETIMES CAUSE THERE'S NOTHING ELSE TO DO OH SWEET 16 ISN'T SO SWEET THATS TRUE THE BOY I LUV IS OUT OF MY REACH AND BEING BROKEN HEARTED ISN'T SO SWEET SO I TRY TO HIDE IT I PASS THROUGH THE DAY WITH A SMILE ON MY FACE AND MY TEARS STASHED AWAY EVERY BODY'S TALKING ABOUT HOW SWEET "16" WILL BE WELL SWEET 16 ISN'T SO SWEET TO ME |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
"sweet" 16. Who cam eup w/ that. There are somany new challenges at 16 it seems overbearing. I understand exactly where you are coming from. I hope as you grow from these experience and years pass when you look back at 16, you have found things have worked out to be a little sweeter than you thaught "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh boy ... I sure remember thinking some similar thoughts when I turned 16 Layla ... It sure can be contradictory can't it? Nicely penned, great expression! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
I wil be 18 in a few weeks...16 was a good year for me...well, it was and it wasnt. I had boyfriend problems, along with family problems, but trust me, each year gets better and better  Keep yur head up ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~ “Tyme heals all wounds, but some might just take a lifetyme to heal.” ~Me |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
This was really good...I feel the same exact way, I'm turning 16 in a couple months, and it doesn't look like my future is so sweet. Everyone says that it's the perfect age, the best times of your life, but I really hope this isn't the best time of my life. I'm sure everything will get better thought. Keep smiling and think happy thoughts. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This poem was very good, it states your feelings so well. Great job on it and keep posting for us "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Rhiannon Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 95Fayetteville, TN USA |
i really loved this poem. on my 16th birthday my boyfriend cheated on me. so my sweet 16 wasn't so sweet either. this poem really struck me, thanks for the read. The night is my companion The solitude my guide Would I spend forever here And not be satisfied? Sarah MacLachlan, "Possession" |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Im turning 16 in a few months too and i shur as hell hope that these arent the best times of your life like their suppose to be cause then i'd be miserable forever...gee doesnt that sound like fun!? Sweet 16...I'm having enough problems at 15 im almost scared to turn 16 lol..This was a wonderful poem gurl..good job |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this poem completely rocked!! I loved it......it flowed perfectly! Great job!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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vix616 Junior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 22 |
I completely understand how you feel coz i feel the same. I sometimes just feel 'wots the point in having a life if its going to be this bad' but then i realise that there's no point thinking like this. We have to try make the best of the way things are..and hope, dream, pray that they will change someday!! |
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