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Tia Junior Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 41massachusetts |
When I saw you in the doorway you looked into my eyes I wished it was like before, before all the lies I know I still love you but you don't feel the same I crumbled up your world I'm the only one to blame I'm so sorry for making you cry and I'm so sorry for all of the lies I wish you knew how much I care and have you come back to me but I know that will never happen i just wish that you could see that I'll always love you that's how it'll always be I just wish that you could love me I just wish that you could see My theory is that I might die at any moment, the tragety is that I don't... |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Oh.. I know how you're feeling, my friend. It always hurts to love someone who doesn't have feelings for you anymore. I hope writing this helped you feel better. Thanks for sharing.< !signature--> "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav [This message has been edited by LoveBug (edited 11-25-2000).] |
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vix616 Junior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 22 |
I understand how u feel Tia - i'm sure we all do and have been through or are going through the same thing luv vicki  |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
This was a really good poem. I've felt like this before. And I've wished that all the guys that I've had crushes on would see right into me so they could know what I'm feeling. You expressed this well. Good Job!  )~Writing is filling up your soul with words~ --Me |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This one was good, it really tells your feelings well. Nicely written  < !signature-->"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 11-25-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
We all make mistakes and learn from them. So learn from what you did wrong and dont do it again. Thanks for sharing this piece. People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great.........unrequited love really does suck. I hope the best for you! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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