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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI 
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Hehehe..I wrote this in 6th grade. Ah, memories... Wonderful Wind Wind, you can Move the sand. Wind, you will Give me a chill. Wind, you are The sweetest by far. Wind, you toss The leaves across Wind, you sing Whistle, and ring Wind, don't go You thrill me so. |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
This is cute... A very refreshing read.  Thank you for shareing. IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Talent early on! Thanks for posting! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Looks like you always had talent huh?? Hehehe |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This one is really good, i think it's kind of cute. i know, wind, cute? i'm messed up Anyway, do you have a lot of poems from when you were younger? "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Ah, thanks you guys!! And yeah, I have billions of poems from when I was younger... most of them have to do with frogs......heh well thanks again people!! ~Carly A word is dead When it is said Some say, I say it just Begins to live That day. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow this amazes me. You wrote this as a 6th grader?!?!?! Hahaha i started to write as a 7th grader and my poems were like: (actual excerpt from a poem called Cocky Me) You can't be fat or ugly Or i'll kick your fugly ass! Great huh? hahahahaha great poem!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
this poem if wonderful. it makes me sad to see that my poem can't even compare to a 6th grader  well, who cares? thanks for the wonderful read  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Geesh acire! Don't even SAY a thing like that!!! You are GOOD. VERY GOOD. And you write things that mean everything to you, I didn't. That's the difference. Well thanks peeps.. ~Carly< !signature--> Pardon me while I burst into flames. I've had enough of the world and it's people's mindless games... [This message has been edited by Child of the Stars (edited 12-10-2000).] |
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