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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
You look at me with pity and fear. My questions answered with a question of your own, A straight answer never given. You run me in circles, Taking my money and my time, While further down I drown. I scream, I plead, and I bare my soul, But you stare back in cold detachment. After years of training, is this all you can do? You can't understand. You've never been where I am, And yet you are supposed to be at the top of your field. The bell rings, Our session over, And you collect your fee. Another session scheduled, Another game to play. You move on to the next tortured soul. Why did I keep returning? At that time in my life you were my only hope. It's been two years now, And I play this game alone. I've picked up the pieces, I will be well, And I will continue to fight on. *Jennifer |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this was great. This is one of the reasons I have turned down going to these kind of people. I have been on the brink of utter insanity, literally.......but never went. Always ended up pulling through somehow. Good poem.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great poem, it has some interesting ideas in there, keep the poems coming  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
I really don't like those people. Ice eyes. Ice hearts. Great job in showing how some of these therapists work... ~Carly |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
Good poem it shows how you feel. ~Min~ |
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apsara Member
since 2000-11-09
Posts 70 |
I know how you feel. It didn't turn out well for me too. I know now that its better to turn to the ones you love. Great job on the poem. apsara |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
Very insightful..I like it.. Keep posting.. "..don't get sentimental It always..ends up drivel" - Let Down, Radiohead |
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