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She never left. (HAPPY POEM!!!!)
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She never left. (HAPPY POEM!!!!) |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI 
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She never left. She told me she was leaving, Far away from me, That our realationship could "no longer be" We both thought the day would come where we sat down for the last time on the couch, The last kiss we thought we would ever share was unbelievable, The great thing about it was..... SHE NEVER LEFT! We both assumed way to fast, That she would move away at last, Her dad said she didnt have to if she didnt want, So here in my arms she will always sit, I will hold her like I am holding a newborn baby, Tight,with lots of love and never wanting to let go. P.S. I hope you guys like this one I wrote it because me and my gf found out she didnt have to move her dad understood she had to much here and I AM SOOOOOOO HAPPY GOTTA JET LOVE YA ALLS!!! (THIS ONE'S REAL GUYS) LOL [This message has been edited by branden726 (edited 12-09-2000).] |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
WOOHOO!!!! I'm so glad that everything worked out for you! Your poem describes your joy beautifully. Thanks for posting. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Hey Branden ... great news, and you portrayed your excitement beautifully in this piece. I'm happy for you both ... nice expression!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!! Do the happy dance, do the happy dance...great poem to tell some great news. ~Carly |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This one seemed so enthusiastic, nice job You must be sick of riding this rollercoaster of feelings you've been on! I hope your current happiness lasts a long long time "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
DO THE HAPPY DANCE!!! *does it with carly and branden* wah00!!!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Well i guess i can join in on this happy dance for a while and well i hope this happy dance last for a long time to i think im getting motion sickness from all these loops in my life but all well thats what u have to go threw to get true love then ill do it. thanks guys! "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
*Cuts the music* Hey, nobody can be happy unless I'm happy. lol jk *turns music back on and does the happy dance w/ branden and the others* Great poem and great news Branden. IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
doing a lil dance shaking my bootey getting my groove on yahoo! this is so great and ive been so happy for like the last week....how great! |
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