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Demon_knight
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0 posted 2000-11-20 08:45 PM


Here I am feeling alive again,
Just one more day to right my sins,
Count my blessing one by one,
Acctually when you get into in it gets fun.

All of earth awaits your face,
Please Come to my temple and bless the place,
All the chains have been broken off my back,
So satan you better run because It's my turn to attack.

I am one that seeks God for fun,
God is good,
God is fun,
God healed me so I can run.

People watch from their daily live,
Never really knowing what it means to be alive,
People hide under thier own little shadow,
But when God comes to town it won't matter.

People please hear God calling,
Don't you Realize you might be falling,
Who better to catch you when you do fall,
God is the one you need to call.


Here is my torch held up high,
Take it is you will be blessed and,
I might stop by!




When people find true love it's better than ok.
But you can be a fool to let love slip away.
ME

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LoveBug
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1 posted 2000-11-21 12:39 PM


This is a great testimony to God's power and what He can do and how horrible it is when people turn Him away. I'm so glad that you have God in your life, and I'm glad that you shared this with us so that others can see God's power. Thanks for sharing.

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav



Child of the Stars
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2 posted 2000-11-21 11:08 AM



  Hey. This was really great..It's good to know that God loves us Great poem, keep it up, and keep the faith...

   ~Carly

Lakewalker
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3 posted 2000-11-22 03:40 PM


"God is good,
God is fun,"

Excellent job of spreading this great message

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

http://www.thehungersite.com

Dopey Dope
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4 posted 2000-11-25 01:02 AM


This is great. I love God, and therefore I think the poem has a great message.
Keep them comin buddy!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


Demon_knight
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5 posted 2000-11-25 07:20 PM


hey everybody thanks for the replys
The most I can say is a humble man makes his bed with God but false man makes his bed with the world

When people find true love it's better than ok.
But you can be a fool to let love slip away.
ME

Greeneyes617
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since 2000-11-22
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6 posted 2000-11-26 02:16 AM


This is a beautiful poem. May God use you to do his will.


[This message has been edited by Greeneyes617 (edited 11-27-2000).]

vlraynes
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7 posted 2000-12-02 01:19 AM



Demon_Knight-
   This is absolutely wonderful.  
   I admire your willingness to share
   your faith with others so freely.
   This is a beautiful testiment of
   your love of God, and the power
   He has in your life...
   Thanks so much for sharing this.

   *smiles*,
   ~vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



B@BYG!RL
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8 posted 2000-12-02 08:20 AM


Thanx for sharing it.. it was has a great message, once again, great!

~Dianne

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