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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI 
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Uhh...don't ask where this came from...... Root beer from the bottle baby Sanity's makin' me go crazy Do you love me? You say MAYBE???? Help me, I'm lost in abusive blues... Anarchy's the cry of the people Raven's perched on your church steeple Then the smeaple (what the heck's a smeaple?) Was nibblin on my blue suede shoes... [This message has been edited by Child of the Stars (edited 11-28-2000).] |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
this was intersting.....good work Regina |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Root beer from the bottle baby!!! This caught me off guard. I liked it though IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
WHERE DID THIS COME FROM?! Ha! I asked.....i continue my reign of defiance! mwhahaha!!! great poem.....odd....i like odd.....odd=great.... well most of the time hehe. But this was good! mwhahaha!!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a bit strange, but it's good. I can't exactly figure out the symbolism, though. Anyway, keep up the good work! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
That first line caught my attention too, and the whole poem, yeah, it's different. Nice job  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Ooh! ooooh! oh! Let me esplain!!!!!! Root beer from the bottle baby=i do things differently when im alone. like drink root beer from the bottle. Sanity's makin' me go crazy=well, it is....lol.. Do you love me? You say MAYBE????=somebody's not sure if they love me. Help me, I'm lost in abusive blues...=im lost in this depression that keeps beating me up. Anarchy's the cry of the people=the whole presidential election deal. people are pleading for anarchy.. Raven's perched on your church steeple=churches dont have the power of light anymore Then the smeaple (what the heck's a smeaple?)=no idea..... Was nibblin on my blue suede shoes...=good times are bein eaten up. So tank yew all for reading!!! < !signature--> Home is where the heart goes when it needs a band-aid. [This message has been edited by Child of the Stars (edited 11-29-2000).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
This is really great...creative and fun! I love it! *smiles*, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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B@BYG!RL Junior Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 19Australia |
Your opening line caught my eye. Thanx for explaining the lines, i understand it now Very creative! and different, but a good kinda different! ~Dianne |
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