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into the night with nothing to write
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into the night with nothing to write |
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mopey Junior Member
since 2000-11-14
Posts 12 |
I LIKE WRITING BUT I HAVE NOTHING TO WRITE THE URGE TO HURT MYSELF I MUST FIGHT FIGHT FOR MY LIFE FIGHT FOR MY SANITY SO MUCH PAIN SO MUCH VANITY I WAN TO BE PERFECT THE AMERICAN DREAM ALL THE FRUSTRATION IS MAKING ME SCREAM SCREAM IN MY HEART SCREAM IN MY MIND THE WILL TO GO ON I MUST FIND SO LEAVE ME TO SCREAM AND LEAVE ME TO FIGHT LEAVE ME TO WRITE INTO THE NIGHT |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey, this was..wow...I felt like someone was actually screaming....I don't know, I just felt this kinda conenction with this..soo uhh great job... ~Carly p.s. to get the signature, go to 'member's area' up at the top of your screen, then 'change profile', scroll down and enter a signature.  [This message has been edited by Child of the Stars (edited 11-21-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow ... powerful emotions expressed in this piece Mopey. Keep fighting, and please, if this is true to life ... do not hurt yourself. It's so difficult when we are either perfectionists, or if others expect us to be perfect. I struggled with this when I was younger, until finally I did realize that no one is perfect, so why on earth should "I" be any different. It was a tough thought to get through my head ... but it sure makes life a lot happier when you realize we're allowed to make mistakes. Very expressive writing, great therapy for the soul, nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
This is weel written. I can feel you r frustration. I thin kwriting in in all caps adds to the intensity. Nice job IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
That was all very raw and pure, straight from the soul. I love it when poets can express the inner voice that most shun away as bad thoughts.....very good. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This one is really good, it seemed intense. Great work here! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Yea this one was definately intense but i also feel like this a lot. Great job |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
*quivers* the power in this one makes me shiver................i'll get back to you when i recooperate!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
mopey, the title pulled me in and i have been there myself....the desire to express your frustration but those darned stubborn words wouldnt come out...hmmmm well, at least you wrote this one |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
mopey- wow...what a powerful write! i think many of us, at one time or another, have experienced the frustration you write of...you've done an excellent job of expressing these emotions... scream when you must... fight the negative feelings when you must... and above all WRITE WHEN YOU MUST.. *smiles* ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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B@BYG!RL Junior Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 19Australia |
Darn writers block!! I always have it...  Glad you managed to get a really good poem out!! ~Dianne |
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