Teen Poetry #3 |
![]() ![]() |
To Stand in God's Country |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Standing in God's country is where I am, Just me and my Lord hand in hand, This place is so beautiful I want to cry, But the loving father wipes the tears from my eyes. Th stand with God is an awesome place to be, Its better than race cars and diamond rings, Standing with God is an awesomeplace to be, Because of his love that will set you free. For I knew a man that died on the cross, Who died for the world, the confused, and the lost, With every drop of blood another life was saved That is one reason I am here today. This man I know is my very best friend, His name is Jesus Christ and his love is without end, Standingin God's country is where I am Just me, God, and Jesus all hand in hand. ![]() |
||
© Copyright 2001 Michael Jay vaughn - All Rights Reserved | |||
Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
Hey, Jay another great poem. I like it. Keep up the good work. ****Taught him eveything I know! ![]() Love ya bro! |
||
Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Wow. That is powerful. I love it a lot! ![]() Keep writing!! ~*Rhonda "I am Canadian" - Joe If you set limitations upon yourself, it's no wonder you fall short of your dreams - Rhonda J. Adolph |
||
LoveBug![]()
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful tribute to our Lord Jesus Christ. I'm glad that you have His fire burning inside of you, and that you've shared it with all of us. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
||
jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
this is very sentimental the hand in hand unity is full of imagery i like that youre more focused on symbols of faith rather than material things! great poem ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
||
Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautifully written jytree, and sentiments I hold true to heart also ... very nicely done! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
||
Dopey Dope![]()
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great jytree. Nice to see you back. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
||
Rayz Junior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 13Fresno, CA, U.S.A |
jytree, That is a awesome poem, keep up the good work. I really loved how you wrote about Jesus. It's good to know that there are others out there who love Chirst. |
||
Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great poem, I like how it's written and of course the meaning is awesome. Thanks for sharing this ![]() "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
||
Acies![]()
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
this is a poem that i'm sure you're very proud off, and you should be. There's no wrong in sharing our faith ![]() ![]() I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
||
![]() ![]() |
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |