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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
When your saying sweet things my heart melts and fills with love when I'm in your arms I could die and cry. When I cannot face the day your there making me laugh, talking to me, holding me you try your hardest and I can tell when the day comes that we say goodbye I'll be sad. All my hopes and dreams depend on you and when I'm hoping for something it comes to life when I'm dreaming about something it also comes to life I hope one day all your troubles will be gone I dream of us hugging and kissing and smiling my dreams only come true. All day I thnk of youand at night when I'm lost you find me I think of how happy I am with you.If a tear comes down my eye you'll be there to wipe it off if a tear comes down your eye I'll be there to wipe it away. Just because we aren't going out doesn't mean I can't love you or hug you or talk to you.~*~Minna~*~  |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey there. This was really sweet, it's great that you've got someone to feel this way about. Super poem ~Carly |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think you did a really really really really good job of expressing these feelings Nice poem, I like it  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
The expression in this poem is great! I liked it a lot. Hope you find a title soon!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hey Minna, seems like you really have a big longing for someone. kindda obvious in the way you poem is expressed. hey, good luck. try telling him is all i can say. thanks for sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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