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layla Member
since 2000-11-19
Posts 74 |
children run around innocence is abundant-and laughter the wrong sound their joy clashes with our sorrow but we'll wait and see what comes tommorow for all innocence lost, guilt is gained its the way of life theres no escape and my carefree days, where did they go? I will never see them that is all I know it seems like my love for life and many things were just suddenly taken by the wind taken by the wind- along with my innocence I'd try to hang on to it but it's out of our hands we cant mess with life, and life's demands they'll soon realize how high the cost for there is no greater loss than innocence lost |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Welcome to Passions!! This is a really sad poem. We all long for that childhood innocence. You describe the feelings well. Keep up the great work! PS-check your e-mail! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
I agree with LB. You did a great job expressing some strong emotions here. Welcome to Passions IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN" ~Hatebreed~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
layla- Welcome to Passions!!  What a wonderful entrance you've made with this sad, but heartfelt piece. I hope you enjoy yourself here, and I look forward to reading more. *smiles*, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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tq_99 Junior Member
since 2000-11-14
Posts 45Las Vegas, NM, US |
Welcome to Passions! That was a very good poem, sad, but powerful. I loved the way that you described everything. Keep up the good work! "Some say a rich man has it all but if he has no friends he is nothing" |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
for all innocence lost, guilt is gained that's a very good line, layla, welcome to passions... stay a long while why don't yuh. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
welcome to passions! I often felt the same way as well..thanx for expressing them out and im glad i read this one  Oh, to be chidlike again! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Welcome To Passions!!!!!!!! I know exactly how you feel...i miss my innocence sooo much!! God...i loved it when the hardest decision of my day was whether or not to use Color the house i drew in class brown or grey...lol those were the days...I cant wait to see more!! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions I hope you enjoy it here! I liked this, great job on the poem! Please post some more for us to see "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
hey welcome to passions! your poem showed your feelings it was very good. I hope to see more of your poems on here. minna If I could walk I'd be glad..But I'm glad the way I am- ~*~me~*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Bienvenidos a Passions........que lo pases bien!!!! Su poema era un inspiracion! Me gusto muchisimo.......quiero verte mas aqui en la poesia de los jovenes.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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LoveAll Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 148B'dale, USA |
Wow...this is such an amazing piece! I used to feel this way, until I came to Jesus. Jesus totally showed me the joy in life, and how things CAN be carefree once and a while. You can lay down EVERYTHING in your life at His feet, and He takes the burden. You are a child again in His eyes. I hope you can feel the same joy I feel everyday once again! God Bless and Keep Smiling P.S.- You are such a wonderful poet! Those who hope in the Lord will renew their strength. They will soar on wings like eagles; run and not grow weary, walk and not be faint. Isaiah 40:3 |
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LoveAll Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 148B'dale, USA |
Wow...this is such an amazing piece! I used to feel this way, until I came to Jesus. Jesus totally showed me the joy in life, and how things CAN be carefree once and a while. You can lay down EVERYTHING in your life at His feet, and He takes the burden. You are a child again in His eyes. I hope you can feel the same joy I feel everyday once again! God Bless and Keep Smiling P.S.- You are such a wonderful poet! Those who hope in the Lord will renew their strength. They will soar on wings like eagles; run and not grow weary, walk and not be faint. Isaiah 40:3 |
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LoveAll Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 148B'dale, USA |
Wow...this is such an amazing piece! I used to feel this way, until I came to Jesus. Jesus totally showed me the joy in life, and how things CAN be carefree once and a while. You can lay down EVERYTHING in your life at His feet, and He takes the burden. You are a child again in His eyes. I hope you can feel the same joy I feel everyday once again! God Bless and Keep Smiling P.S.- You are such a wonderful poet! Those who hope in the Lord will renew their strength. They will soar on wings like eagles; run and not grow weary, walk and not be faint. Isaiah 40:3 |
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