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Just the same |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
You look into my eyes, I see your in pain. I know how your feeling. I feel just the same. I want to say it will all be better, That this is just a game. But i know what this has done to you, You will be forever changed. Dont give up hope, Please take my hand. Know that i'm here, Know I understand. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This has a great meaning. I have trouble with it though because someone told me that, so I held out my hand it wasn't met. She was gone, again. If you are going to offer, make good with your promise and you will be held in the highest regards. Keoni |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Shugar~ Realizing that someone else is going through what you go through is somewhat good...Cuz then you have someone to help and get help from...It may be a difficult situation but you wont need to go looking for help then...You did a really good job on this!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
What a nice poem, it's good to hear that you will be there for them  Good job on the poem!!"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
Excellent poem! I loved it!! "Dont give up hope, Please take my hand. Know that i'm here, Know I understand." those last lines were my favorite part! Great job! keep up the awesome work, and keep writing!! Luv, ~*~Sweetstuff~*~< !signature--> ~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~ [This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 11-02-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. Thanks for sharring. I don't really have anything elaborate to say about this poem, because when i finished i just smiled and liked it.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
that's really really sweet, shugar. I just thought that I would tell you that. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I'm glad that you guys liked it...Thanx for all of your reply's!! |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
wow this was really really sweet. for me it's hard to look into a guys eyes without tearing up, of course it's only been once, but anyway. great poem! Curlz "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
awww....what a way to reassure someone. My heart just skipped a beat. this is really very sweet I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"Shared joy is double joy Shared sorrow is half sorrow" -Sweedish proverb You've proved this quote very well in this piece. I hope you always have someone to share your experiences with. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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