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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Dreams Dreams come to you in the night They fill your head with the sweetest things Dreams are peaceful and full of life and colors The colors are so bright and beautiful Dreaming beneath the stars is wonderful You wake up in the middle of the night Look up at the stars And go back to sleep only to have another dream "I feel fine enough I guess considering everything's a mess" Barenaked Ladies |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. You did a terrific job of telling the sweet side of dreams, I appload you. Keep it up... ~Carly The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yea well this was good, we all love dreams  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
hey  this was great..very true, tooLOL Dopey that was cute..u crack me up  keep writing! **DQ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Ahhhh....dreams nice poem!"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Don't you just sometimes wish that you never wake up anymore cause of your dream? You did a reallygreat job on this one curly I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Yeah tru unless they're NIGHTMARES!! Like all of MINE!!! Sorry, boredom. Wooooooowwwwwwwww I need some SLEEP!!! I'll shut up now, it's a good one, shorest one I've seen from you Bel |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
curlygurly- ah yes...i do love dreams.. very nice. *smiles*, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
dreams are usually fun and this was a really good poem...i liked it.. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yea good dreams are good. but ive been through the worst dreams imaginable.............ew.. so in conclusion...bad dreams are bad. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
There is nothing like a beautiful dream, is there? The only thing about good dreams is that you have to wake up sometime!  You describe them beautifully. Keep up the good work! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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