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mr0001
Junior Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 39


0 posted 2000-06-13 01:56 AM




i'm so tired of these games we play;
just kiss me and lets forget them all.
it doesn't matter to me what they say;
just touch me and i'll forget them all.

the games will get old,
and we'll still be here.
the rumor's will fade away,
and we'll still be here.

what we have breaks the rules,
a love too strong to die.
no one will ever be able to break
a love too strong to die.


 "crazy" is just who you are...amplified.

some people draw the outlines in life, i chose to add the color.


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amazon_lover
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
1 posted 2000-06-13 11:14 AM


Hi
It's the power of love..even in despair hope still lingers..

very simple...

Sincerely
A_L

Jenabou
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA
2 posted 2000-06-13 12:41 PM


good poem
it was really straight forward and to the point.
i enjoyed it
infact i enjoy all the poems you have posted here! keep it up  

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-11-17 01:58 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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