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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Today I gained strength and faith To look past what made me ill all along When she left me why I felt so broken Not because she left me without a love token It was an ego that was holding it I failed to see it was tearing me bit by bit I've my ego crushed now and I feel free Free to love a person without holding on Not to fear a friend who'll part soon Show your love and compassion to all without any expectation For nothing matters in the except a sense of satisfaction To have loved and to have been loved I carry on today and forever with self-esteem Which I'll never spare for a fantastic dream Sincerely A_L |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
Great poem. i know it can hurt when someone you love leaves you. You just need to allow your heart time to heal. which you obviously did. just remember everythign happens for a reason!  |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
great poem. i know it hurts but times and things change. i guess its part of life that things don't stay the same. so we all move along each day on our paths. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Yup, it does hurt, and time does heal all wounds. You expressed your feeling very nice. Great Job  !~Susie "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility." ~Henry W |
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Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
Hey there, I thought from the title of this poem it was a positive one -- turns out I was right  ) This poem is exactly how I feel, only better said. Good job.Crystal Maybe God has us meet a few wrong people so that when we meet the right one we can truly appreciate the gift. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
its great to be loved. huh???? but it hurts like hell when you lose it. but thats some of the consequences of life. right???? your poem is really touching. alot of people go through tough times then after time passes you get through it. but you got to let go and its hard. i know how you feel. i fell in love with my best friend only to get played like a fool. it shows how much this person cares. yeah right. people say us teenagers only have "puppy love". but see they dont know how we feel. we all have feeling and emotions but some just see right past them. because of or age. and they were in our shoes at one time and they need to realize that teenagers are different then they were back when they were young. i dont know why im going on and on but your poem was BEAUTIFUL. i give you props for it. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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