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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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I found myself dipping my foot into the nostaglic pool The ripples and waves Started to play with my mind And what I found reflecting back at me was you Your eyes so perfectly radiating a mixture of green and blue And your lips whispering, "I love you" But how could that be When you've never uttered those words to me It must be a mixture of the wind and my stirring emotions To think of such a silly notion But yet the birds seemed to know your voice As they softly whispered amongst the noise Of the ripples and waves It's as if your unspoken words Were coming to me beyond the grave Yet why should it have startled me Or even bothered me To fancy such an unrealistic fantasy As the pond reflected such long forgotten desires And helped re-fuel all forbidden fires.... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Lovely Ceinwyn! Wonderfully descriptive, and beautifully composed ... much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
It's amazing how just one glance, one thought of a person from your past can get all of those feelings started again. I know the feeling well, and you describe it beautifully in this poem. Thanks for sharing! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ceinwyn- this is just beautiful. wonderfully written. really enjoyed reading it. take care, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Wow. You've surely got talent, keep it up!! I really enjoyed reading this. ~Carly A word is dead When it is said Some say, I say it just Begins to live That day. |
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mopey Junior Member
since 2000-11-14
Posts 12 |
that poem was wonderful. i love the way you did it, not like you were acually talking to the person but more like pretending they were there and talking to them. It reminded me of a dream i once had. great work!! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is really good, I liked how you put this: "nostaglic pool". Nice job "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yea this was great just like all of the rest. I loved everything about this poem. Keep them coming!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
OMG!!! I thought this is really good. I really cannot find the words to describe how much i love your poem. you deserve a standing ovation. thanks for the share. it was an honor to read it I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
You always write beautiful work...I love reading it!!!Keep it up... People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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