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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Together we are And always will be I love you and You love me With marriage in the future And friendship in the past We will have a love That forever will last We know alot about each other And still have lots to learn But we will pass that obstacle And watch that one bridge burn I thank the Lord That I can see The kind of love I wanted In the love that you give me March 14, 2000 Written for my husband before we were engaged. He kept all four poems that I wrote him that day...I found them while I was packing our stuff...Isn't that sweet???  ~*~SCG~*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
A very sweet poem for a very sweet husband. I hope all is well with you and your daughter and things continue so in the future.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think I speak for everyone when I say: Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Good job "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Yankee10n20BFF Junior Member
since 2000-11-02
Posts 27T-Town, AL |
I thought that this was a great poem about love. Keep up the good work!!! No matter what you are going through, all you have to do is close your eyes and dream cause no one can take them away from you. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
SCG~ Awww that was so sweet...I wish you the best of luck with your husband...Sounds like you are really happy!!!  ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Dopey_dope: Thanks for your reply. One thing bothers me though...I don't have a daughter..not yet anyway...what made you think I did??? Lakewalker: AWWWWWW How nice of you Yankee: Thanks for the compliment! Erin: Thanks alot...I'm sure he does too! ~*~SCG~*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
ahahahahaha oh......i must be confused or something. Sorry, i get stupid once in a while and my memory fades.....just a minor confusion. Well anyway if you had a daughter i'd hoped things would be good but since you don't......may your future daughter/son be good hehe. "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
That was a really sweet poem! I hope that someone writes that about me someday lol Curlz "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Thanks to both of you! Curly: Good Luck ~*~SCG~*~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Your husband is lucky to have someone like you. Someone who feels this way about him. Hope one day I'd find someone who'd feel the same way too. thanks for the wonderful read I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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