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What I had, and what i'm still looking for....
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What I had, and what i'm still looking for.... |
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Rhiannon Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 95Fayetteville, TN USA |
Sometimes I get scared that Love is never gonna come around Again I had the boy, I had All those nice little feelings All those wonderful little moments All those little lies I realized that I wasn't gonna get Everything I wanted So I held out I had myself, I had My dignity My self respect My loneliness I felt as though I could find another As easy as I found the other But I was wrong I had nothing, I had No love in my life No sweet little kisses on my forehead No embraces to look forward to And still I am looking, For that feeling, The feeling I thought I had so Long ago No luck so far.... The night is my companion The solitude my guide Would I spend forever here And not be satisfied? Sarah MacLachlan, "Possession" |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
You really express your feelings beautifully through this piece. Love is a funny thing, when you think that you'll never possess it again, it sneaks up on you. The person that you are meant to be with will come to you, you just have to keep your eyes peeled. Best of luck! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
This is so well written and I do enjoy reading you; hey! it's probably only been few hours or so (time makes no difference) don't sell yourself short or give "him" too much credit...go girl!  Enjoyed, good write. |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Don't worry chica, i know how you feel. i was blinded by my ex and didn't think i could get a better bf so i stayed with him. now i don't know if i will ever find another one. keep up your hopes, one day he'll come(that's what i'm tellin myself) Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Rhiannon Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 95Fayetteville, TN USA |
Thank you everyone, your imput is so very appreciated. You guys rawk love leslie |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I also think that this one was well written, it really gets your feelings out. Great job on the poem "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey this was pretty out there. THe in-your-face-believe-it-cuz-it's-true style rocks! I loved it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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