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~*~PrettyGirly~*~
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0 posted 2000-11-18 12:06 PM


I see you online
I cry because you don't want me
you IM me and I have tears in my eyes
I say goodbye and block you
I can't deal with you anymore
you aren't a friend to me
you always turn your back
start talking behind it
I can't deal with you

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branden726
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1 posted 2000-11-18 01:51 PM


Wow, do you know how many times ive wanted to say that? i block so many ppl cuz one minute there your bestfriend online then they talk about you behind your back like your nothing in real life.

"put the name of the person u love, not in a heart because they alway break but put it in a circle which last forever"



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2 posted 2000-11-18 01:57 PM


Powerful poem girl. It's sad that this does happen in life...sometimes someone that you thought was there for you, isn't and I know that it can really hurt and leave you scarred. Try to hang in there and I hope that everything gets better. Very good poem.


"Don't take love for granted...once it's gone, it hurts."

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3 posted 2000-11-18 02:23 PM


It's amazing how different some people can act when they are online compared to how they act in real life. I'm glad that you've decided to block this two-faced person from your life. Thanks for sharing.

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav



Jenn Cirrincione
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4 posted 2000-11-18 07:48 PM


If a person is like this... they aren't worth your time. I'm glad you now see that.   Meaning... in so few words. Kudos!
xoxo
Jenn


"Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC

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5 posted 2000-11-20 03:27 PM


Hey,
Great job on this, it's really to the point.  i like it

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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6 posted 2000-11-24 05:04 PM


This is a horrible situation.
I hope all turns out well.
The angst in this poem is very out there. Good luck!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


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7 posted 2000-11-28 08:02 PM


Is this someone you know personally that you see online?  Or is this an online friend?  I'm asking, because I don't believe on online relationships...I just don't understand how that could ever happen.  Maybe it does, maybe it doesn't...who knows.  One thing i know is that it seem slike you are being hurt by this person.  Do what you have to do, and I think you are on the rightpath...thanks for sharing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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