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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
My love for you You'll never know It's deep inside And my heart won't let it show The reason for this I can explain in a whisp My heart was bruised With one single kiss Now around my heart is a gate But my love for you is so great So it's up to you To tear it away And if you really love me You'll know exactly what to say But once you tear it down Protect it with your arms around You see, I can tell you I love you But not why Cause I'm afraid you reject my Feelings and make me cry So tear up this gate And protect it with all your might Cause I'm so tired of living in fright ~Writing is filling up your soul with words~ --Me |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
HOLY ****! oops am i allowed to say that n e ways if im not then they'll take my reply off n e ways this is one of the greatest poems i read and i think everyone that reply's will agree with me.....all i got to say is.....WOW "put the name of the person u love, not in a heart because they alway break but put it in a circle which last forever" |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a very impressive piece. I know what it's like to be hurt, and to be afraid to love again. You're exactly right, the right person will come along and tear down the gates around your heart. Thanks for sharing. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I really do like this one. It's very descriptive... I hope everything works itself out. "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
I wanted to bump this poem up because it really means a lot to me and i think a lot of people should read it. I thank you so much to ya'll who have replyed to it....this one's from my heart. ~Writing is filling up your soul with words~ --Me |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Anytime you open your heart to someone you take the risk of getting hurt...thats what sux so much about love so its extremely understandable why you'd have a gate around your heart...but u shouldnt live in fear hun...living in fear could prevent the worst thing from happening...but also the best...great poem hun |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
The right person will be able to take down that gate, but the wrong people will make it grow higher. Just don't let it get to big before the right guy comes along. And if he's there now, congrats  Good job on the poem  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey this is great.......i liked it very much!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is really very emotional. I don't blame you for feeling that way...I too have mine blocked right now. The way I look at it though I've bricked myself in and noone again is gonna be allowed to take it. Good for you you're asking him to break it down, but still be careful. thanks for sharing the wonderful poem I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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