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Ode to the Sugar Rush
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Ode to the Sugar Rush |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas 
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Ode to the Sugar Rush. Sugar rush, Sugar rush, Where are you my friend,?? I need you today so my fun will never end, I find you most in my favorite stuff, I just can't get enough, Paydays, Sinckers, and candy too, But you are my most favorite in Mt. Dew, Though my friends think you cool, I need you most for my basic fuel, 12 packs, 24 packs, And 2 liters too, All this energy is because of you. I wrote this with my friend jytree.  |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
She is Cool, I should know she pickes on me, But I don't mind<---Lying.  Love is pure in it's top form, But with out romance love is not born |
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Demon_knight New Member
since 2000-11-15
Posts 8 |
yes I do feel sorry for him. she is a friend I think |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Well I must say this has got to be the cutest, most hilarious thing I've ever read at the forum...awesome job, clever idea. Made me smile, yes it did  ~Kris ~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~ ~Won't you come and hold my hand? This world has taken me as far as it can... w |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Welcome! this was so great. i love sugar highs cuz you just get really really hyper, me n bel do it allll the time. candy is the ultimate high  Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well Well.....a friend of jytree's..hehe welcome to the group! Anyway this was cute.......hehe  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, welcome, this poem was really good, I like it. I'm sure almost everybody here knows the value of a good sugar high "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Welcome to Passions! This is a really cute first post. I hope to see more of you around here! Thanks for posting. PS-Check your e-mail "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
this was a nice poem...it really brightned up my bad day...welcome to passions..hope to see more Ina aka Regina |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
Thanks everyone! I am glad you enjoyed it. I have always loved poetry. Even when I was little. I love to write but a lot of the time I don't share it with others. I see the beautiful work of others and then look at mine. I see a huge difference. I hope to learn a lot about poetry here at Passions. I look forward to reading your work also. God bless you all. [This message has been edited by Greeneyes617 (edited 11-27-2000).] |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Well she is a hand ful just to say, But that is why we get along hehe. Yep Dopey a friend of mine so be afraid be very afraid Love is pure in it's top form, But with out romance love is not born |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME!!! I absolutely LOVE shugarhighs!!!! Cant ya tell by my screen name?? hehehe =o) It was a VERY cute poem..i cant wait to see more from you...welcome!! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
i guess im a little late but still let me WELCOME you to passions this is definitely different from the rest I've read in passions. And I do like it. We do need some poems in here that's not about love, hurt, hate...you know what i mean  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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