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Rhiannon Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 95Fayetteville, TN USA |
Raw And filled up with you This delicious feeling overwhelms me And takes me away I return to the world with this Heavy kind of euophoria And this residue of pleasure Little laughter and little feelings, little Strands of hair in your lips A world in which only I exist Where the walls are thin and transparent Hollow The dust is shifting inside There's no where that I can hide Except when I'm Raw And filled up with you The sky swallows me And let's me drift on it's sweet current The clouds lift me up and Present me to heaven My only God is you The night is my companion The solitude my guide Would I spend forever here And not be satisfied? Sarah MacLachlan, "Possession" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this poem was great. I liked the last line a lot. Keep up the writing!!!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
A world where only I exist great poem  I'm glad you found a man that can make you feel this way Isgona |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, This one is interesting, I like how it's written. Good work "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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