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The cage that keeps my heart.....
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The cage that keeps my heart..... |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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My heart beats in a steel cage, beating against the cold sides, moving to each corner trying to find the door release me please before I turn to stone, the rythem slowly fading. He never will release me because i'm good for show th perfect one, who can spread green fire of jealousy and envy through all hearts I don't need you anymore, i found the door waiting wide open for me Falling away from that cape is the hardest thing to do, you will never if you will be allowed to drop or someone will catch your heart and keep it safe for you I need my heart back so don't let it fall The rythm of my heart gets stronger and I know I will survive..... ~Ina~ |
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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
This poem is Powerful Ina! It's great and it really spoke to me. Sounds like a one-sided relationship...and I know those can really hurt. I hope that everything turns out okay for you. Hang in there. niceguy "Don't take love for granted...once it's gone, it hurts." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hope things turn out fine cutie pie......you know you're worth much more than that!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
I hope you're ok!!! like niceguy said one sided relationships can really hurt! you know we're all here for you! keep smilin!  Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I also hope everything turns out fine for you. I love how you compared this to being caged in, your words are very powerful in the beginning of the poem. nicely done! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Excellent expression Ina ... powerful with such a wonderfully positive ending, great work! Best wishes, /Kit |
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