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Tia Junior Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 41massachusetts |
(this is kinda like a song instead of a poem) Mary had a little lamb, It followed her to school. The teacher yelled and bit**** at her for breaking all the rules. But sometimes you gotta let go, let loose of the feelings you feel Sometimes you gotta let go let loose of everything... Humpty-Dumpty sat on a wall And all his friends left him There was no one there to break his fall when his world came crumbling down. But sometimes you gotta let go let loose of the feelings you feel Sometimes you gotta let go let loose of everything... Little Bo Peep lost all her sheep She tried and tried to find them But no matter how hard she cried or weeped it would not help her a bit. But sometimes you gotta let go let loose of the feelings you feel Sometimes you gotta let go let loose of everything... My theory is that I might die at any moment, the tragety is that I don't... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
A wonderful poem! I liked how you used mother goose stories to aid in your creation. The message is so true.......sometimes you just gotta let it go......good job!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Such a creative way to get the message across!!!Good one!!!Keep it up... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I also liked how you creatively used these in your song, it works very well. Good job on this one, I think it's great  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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