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Misty Blue Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 44 |
Brokenhearted Do believe in love at first sight? Well,I don't and haven't for a long time Ever since that day we couldn't make things right He said he'd always be here He said he'd never leave But in all his lies it's hard for me to believe I saw everything falling apart I tried to make a brand new start The more I tried the further he drifted The center of my world seemed to be lifted Away from life away from love Bring me someone worth the heartache Someone with a special trait When will it all come to an end? I'm guessing before it begins |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
I know it too well..take care..I'm tired of making new starts...its difficult and its funny the course it takes.. Sincerely a_L |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is a good poem...i think alot of us can relate to it...we've all been brokenhearted at one point in our lives...but thats just one of lifes consequences we have to face... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Go ahead and keep trying to make a new start. That's what makes us a better person. I know it's hard but the harder it is the better you'll end up to be. Good Luck Looking forward to reading your other poems. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes do make the new starts you need so that you are happy and don't if you won't be only follow your heart its the only thing that truely guides you. and thanks for shareing this piece of your work such truth said about a fresh start I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
well MIsty Blue~I'm sorry you've felt this pain in your heart! All I can really tell you is that--Time, in it's own essence can heal even deepest of wounds, and with time, your heart will heal.--Just keep your head up, eventually you'll get what you deserve!Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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