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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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This poem may be a little bit graphic, and if it is, let me know, and I'll edit it  Want You To the bedroom, Make love to me Like you never Have before I want you to touch me Want you to love me I want you to kiss me Want you to fall again In the bedroom Make me scream Kiss my breasts Caress me I want you ON me Want you to need me I want you to hold me I want you IN me To the bedroom Make love to me Like you never did before I want you to DO me Want you to touch me I want you to take me Want you here and now In the bedroom Make me moan Caress my breasts Kiss me I want you to caress me Want you to want me I want you to need me Want you to kiss me To the bedroom Make me yours For the rest Of all tyme I want you to hold me Want us to be one I want you IN me Want you ON me (if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- Poetic Bliss 82) |
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Comfrey83 Junior Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 36Winchester, Mass USA |
into tyme? well you know how it is, we all got needs right, its arright though on and on and on well go. hope you get yer sex yer bud Andy |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
all of your demands are made clear here so i hope whoever this is about knows them cause if not he better watch out and run for his life. LOL great work and yes i hope you do get what you want. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Please edit it. Thanks, I appreciate your willingness to follow the rules here. It's greatly appreciated.  |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
graphic, but more importantly honest. straight up and edgy. good work. i certainly hope the dude reads this. We are the Middle Children of History. We have no Great Depression;no Great War. Our Great War is a spiritual one. Our Great Depression is our lives |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
well, somebody's horny. Hey, you should hunt down and check out a poem I posted earlier in June called Musical Bodies...we can compare notes. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
sorry, but it says i can only edit it in the first 24 hours (if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- Poetic Bliss 82) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Send your revised poem to me or any Moderator and we'll edit it for you. I don't want to remove the poem, that's not the intent here..you've written a good poem, it's just a little too much...Thanks again, Tamma. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
umm...definately graphic but I guess all poetry comes from the heart and well, this is apparently what's in your heart. A nice poem, just a little much though. Keep up the writing, just tame it down a little bit. I'm not offended in any way shape or form and think that your poem is lovely indeed, just needs a little bit of taming. Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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