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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Hiding away from the house of pain running away from a certain death learning to live all alone The cold bits through the thin sweater and tears stream down my face from the wind indside I feel nothing anymore Everything looks like a book unreal to the naked eye and I'am just a stranger in the backround of someone elses story The words they spoke echo in my head "you are worthless" "a terrible mistake" never hearing loving words from your mouths Here I'am with a ticket to my life living a life of shame all alone in the cruel world Theres no turning back I've looked towards my future and seen my outcome My life may be worthless and nothing good will come to me but at least I will live happier without your rules I won't experience another day where I cry in pain I won't feel like I'am a lost cause and I won't hear your painful words I won't cave in to your opinions and I won't cry over you now I'm holding my head up high as I sit here and say goodbye "The time to hesitate is through"-Jim Morrison True love requires patience. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is such a sad story. I'm assuming (and hoping) that this doesn't apply to you. It's sad that anyone has to run away from anything, but one thing that everyone should know is that there was and never will be a life that is worthless. Each and every person is of precious worth to our Heavenly Father, the One who will always love you and be with you. You aren't worhtless to Him. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
That was good, but so sad. Please tell me that it doesn't relate to you at all....right? keep up the writing, you're good at it Bel |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
I know your pain and only in the depths of my darkness and depression did I see that I'm not worthless! You aren't either! You were created and given a life for a reason. And just because your parents;I'm assuming, can't realize that doesn't mean you should ignore it. Take your talents and prove to them otherwise! If they still choose to maintain their behavior, then *sad to say* you don't need them! they're only holding you back from success with each and every insult! Have you ever told them how you feel..How they make you feel?? I think maybe they need to know! My heart is with you and if you ever wanna talk e-mail me at [email protected]! keep your head up friend! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Thank you all for your replies, I just wanted to let you all know that it isn't a poem about myself, fortunatly. But I wrote it because I wanted to try to understand what the homeless feel like and understand why they chose to go and live like that. I appreciate all your comments. Thanks again for your replies.smiles  poe  "The time to hesitate is through"-Jim Morrison True love requires patience. |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
well, now that i know this isn't about you, i can spare you the cheering-up-speech. but i have written stuff like this and i feel a great big ol' connection to this piece. for not having been in the situation and only imagining yourself there, trust me, you truly have captured the essecnce of what a runaway feels. i don't know about a homeless person, but a runaway? yes, most definitely. well written. well done. We all got our demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
enjoyed this very much. glad to see i'm not the only one who writes throgh other people eyes. great piece and keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Wow thanks a lot guys. I'm really glad you understand the meaning behind this poem, and that you liked it too. Thanks for repling guys, hope to hear from you again!!smiles poe "The time to hesitate is through"-Jim Morrison True love requires patience. |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
 "The time to hesitate is through"-Jim Morrison True love requires patience. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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