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niceguy
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Sapello, NM, USA

0 posted 2000-11-16 09:32 PM


Here is the other one I wrote concerning my friends death.

Why...

Why does the sun rise and fall?
Why does the darkness continue to invade the light?
Why does God allow this to happen?
Why did he take her?
Why did she have to die?
Why...only he knows.


"Don't take love for granted...once it's gone, it hurts."

© Copyright 2000 John - All Rights Reserved
Ina
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since 2000-10-09
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1 posted 2000-11-16 09:35 PM


im so to hear about your friend...."he" seems to take away alot of young lives...he did that to my bestfriend also..good tribute
Ina

niceguy
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2 posted 2000-11-16 09:46 PM


Thanx Ina and I am sorry to hear about your best friend. It's a sad part of life that no one can really be ready for...but has to learn to cope. Thanx a lot for the reply.
You hang in there too k? C-ya.

Dopey Dope
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3 posted 2000-11-16 10:25 PM


Well i've had 3 friends of mine die......i can tell you that it's not fun. Anyway I hope you cope properly.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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Lakewalker
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4 posted 2000-11-17 12:01 PM


I am sure many people can relate to this poem, including myself.  You did a good job expressing these questions!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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