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tearsinheaven
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since 2000-06-28
Posts 18


0 posted 2000-06-29 01:50 PM


I never thought I could live without you
But here I am
the world didn't end when you left
Though my heart feels as though
I can live without your love
yet it will be in pain
My lord will help me over you
Yet my heart will never heal
You can go on liveing just fine
Knowing the hurt you caused
But you will never know anyone
Who will love you like I

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amazon_lover
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
1 posted 2000-06-29 03:14 PM


Feel just like this..but dont say your life will be pain..yu'll find love someday and you'll never miss it..

Sincerely
a_l

TAP2
Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211
Morris, Il USA
2 posted 2000-06-29 09:53 PM


Been in your shoes before. Let your pen do the hurting for you. Most good poetry is inspired by true feelings.

TAP2

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-06-30 03:23 AM


well what can i say...i know what your going through...i think that alot of us do...dont let this one thing drag you down...honestly...dont live in the past...look to your future...you will meet more guys that will love you and not want to hurt you...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
4 posted 2000-06-30 10:36 AM


Lovely poem.  Be strong cause you will heal no matter how it feels right now.  Someone more deserving of your love will come to your life and he'll return the same amount of love to you or even more.
Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
5 posted 2000-07-01 01:53 AM


let your heart guide you on your path. we each go through these thing and each know the pain but the key is to never give up. cause the truth is if i gave up i would have been dead a long time ago

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
6 posted 2000-07-02 12:04 PM


Oh my dear friend!! I know all too well how you feel! The world didn't end when my love left, and sometimes I wish it would have because I wouldn't have to deal with the hurt inside my heart. Keep your chin up I know things will get better! With time your heart will heal! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~
~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
7 posted 2007-11-24 07:20 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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