Teen Poetry #3 |
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without you |
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tearsinheaven Junior Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 18 |
I never thought I could live without you But here I am the world didn't end when you left Though my heart feels as though I can live without your love yet it will be in pain My lord will help me over you Yet my heart will never heal You can go on liveing just fine Knowing the hurt you caused But you will never know anyone Who will love you like I |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Feel just like this..but dont say your life will be pain..yu'll find love someday and you'll never miss it.. Sincerely a_l |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Been in your shoes before. Let your pen do the hurting for you. Most good poetry is inspired by true feelings. TAP2 |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
well what can i say...i know what your going through...i think that alot of us do...dont let this one thing drag you down...honestly...dont live in the past...look to your future...you will meet more guys that will love you and not want to hurt you... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Lovely poem. Be strong cause you will heal no matter how it feels right now. Someone more deserving of your love will come to your life and he'll return the same amount of love to you or even more. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
let your heart guide you on your path. we each go through these thing and each know the pain but the key is to never give up. cause the truth is if i gave up i would have been dead a long time ago I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Oh my dear friend!! I know all too well how you feel! The world didn't end when my love left, and sometimes I wish it would have because I wouldn't have to deal with the hurt inside my heart. Keep your chin up I know things will get better! With time your heart will heal! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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