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Rockhead01 Junior Member
since 2000-06-26
Posts 12Maryland, USA |
Valentine If I love you and you love me I know right then we were meant to be Feeling your warm body close to mine Would make me happy for all time I'll always love you, whatever you do If we have a problem, we'll work it through I'll give you what you want no matter how hard I'll give you my love straight from the heart I have a statement and it's honestly true So believe me when I say "I love you" I love the way the wind blows through your hair And how your sweet aroma flows through the air I love the way your body feels warm against mine And how your precious lips taste sweet like wine When I think of you only good things come to mind And all those good things in you I hope to find I love you so much words cannot explain If I cannot have you, I will surely go insane I do not care if you're pretty or not In my eyes you'll always be hot You're the best thing that has ever happened to me We are like two doves nestled in a tree I cannot stand us being apart You're the only thing that can fill my heart I've thought long and hard and think it's time So please, oh please, will you be my valentine? -This poem was written a long time ago and is not what my writing is like now but I hope you like it anyways. ~Dan~ Make Love Not War |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
well penned thoughts. and i know what you mean in those comments at the end. i used to write nice stuff like that too. i hope the feelings return to you. cause if there's one thing i know, it's that the the past, she never let's go. We all got our demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well i voted just to let you know because i really enjoyed this read so thanks for posting it and i hope to read more from you real soon so keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
AAAAHHHHH..Young love...how can I count the ways this makes my heart melt. You did a great job "proving" in the poem that you really were in love...nice jobby. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
dan...i really liked this poem...you have my vote...it is such a cute poem...oh if you were to give this to me on valentines my heart would melt...even if it was a long time ago but i like it alot... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Dan~you've definately got my vote!! I hope that you still write like this at least every now and then, because it is simply wonderful! Keep it up! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Nothing wrong with this poem. Wouldn't be anything wrong with you still writng like this either. I think it's a good piece. TAP2 |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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