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Soul's Delight |
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Demon_knight New Member
since 2000-11-15
Posts 8 |
Let me speak of the soul's delight, As we woo are loved all night, From the earth I came, So will I go, When it is my time, To burn below. Here me now oh friends of light, Teach us how to act and what is right, For when the world comes to a end, Who will be there standing as my friend, Or is it to be that I stand alone, The world is spinning beyond my throne, Is this how it feels to be alone. In this life only two things remain dear to me, and these thing realise the steam, The two things that are in my heart, The things that keep me from ripping apart. The two thing are my soul's delight, They are my love for girls, and my love for God, These are them I try to perfect, so life won't hurt when I feel neglect, So now I stand all alone, Just me, my heart, and my poems.  |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Welcome to Passions! I'm glad that you've joined us! This is a very good poem. I love the flow it has. Whenever times are tough, a poet always has their poems!  Keep up the great work!PS-check your e-mail! False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! A wonderful first post and awaiting more!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Welcome to passions! this was an excellent first post, i can't wait to read more! Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Welcome to passion!wow that was an awesome first post.hope to see more of your poetry. I love the feeling and words in this poem ~Ina~ |
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tq_99 Junior Member
since 2000-11-14
Posts 45Las Vegas, NM, US |
Welcome to Passions! I am also a pretty new memeber but let me tell you that everybody here is a family of friends and are known for their warm welcomes! welcome to the fam! - tq_99 "Some say a rich man has it all but if he has no friends he is nothing" |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions Great entrance post, I'm looking forward to seeing more! I hope you enjoy it here and post some more "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! I agree with the rest, this is really a very good first post. And I too am looking forward to the others that you'd be kind enough to share I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Welcome to Passions =) I hope you enjoy your stay. I like your poem. Though, I am wondering where you got your name from, if you don't mind sharing that is.  |
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Demon_knight New Member
since 2000-11-15
Posts 8 |
Well I am speechless really! I would of never thought That my poem would do that good! I must say lovebug that card you sent me was very sweet thank you and dragonfang I came up with this name from watching the movie the night before!. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Demon_Knight- WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! What a wonderful entrance you've made with this piece...excellent! I hope you enjoy it here, and I look forward to reading lots more from you. *smiles*, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Demon_knight New Member
since 2000-11-15
Posts 8 |
thanks vicky When people find true love it's better than ok. But you can be a fool to let love slip away. ME |
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