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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
We are friends but, I know nothing at all. about the feeling called love you know so well. I've been through things some only fear. I've not told anyone For I am alone. There's noone here to love me anymore. I feel so cold no arms to keep me warm. The feeling is familiar just like an old friend. I've been lonely so long it is all that I know. I hide this feeling as best I can. Putting on a smile so noone knows my pain. I cannot change it believe me, I've tried. For the love of another I have been denied. "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I could feel some of the pain behind this, it's written well. Do you really feel lonely all of the time? "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
These feelings that you have are all too well known by me. I use to feel that exact same way except now i try to let my feelings out a little more. If you keep them inside, they'll continue to damage you. I cannot change it believe me, I've tried. For the love of another I have been denied. That part was great. Wonderful poem but i am sorry that you have such a feeling to write about. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great ending! keep it up!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
Lakewalker- yes i do feel lonely all the time and it's not just a feeling it is reality. Thanx peeps. "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
I NEED A HUG TOO!!! WHERE'S MINE?????!!! I'm alone too...for now...Sis, you are only 20 years old! You have your whole life ahead of you to find the one that God sent for you...You know that! God knows when to show you the person you will spend the rest of your life with...just have faith, keep your head up and keep smiling the smile that I know is the true Barbara that is my sister...I know your pain...remember...I am your sister, and I have lived with you for 18 years. I know what goes on in that house, and outside of it. so don't give me that c*** that you are alone, and no one loves you. You are my sister and I will love you until the day I die! You hear me? ok i think i rambled enough...I just hope you get the message. I have e-mail and so do you...USE IT!!!!! ~*~SCG~*~ |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
great poem!! I know how you feel. Just keep your head up, everything will work out fine. Nice work, keep writing!! Luv, sweetstuff ~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~ |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
SCG- it maybe true that u r my sis, but you no longer live there and So therefore I am alone. sweet- thanx for your reply   "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
If I could I would stick my tounge out at you! ~*~SCG~*~ |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Grrr.... [This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 10-18-2000).] |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
Gee thanx for the support sis! "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
For all of us that are set apart, Really your just sitting in the dark, Open your eyes to see a work of art, Becaue you live in my heart. barb, hey I lonely to but I did it, to both of us, For when the world comes to a end, I'll be there as you loving friend. early to rise, early to bed, make a man healthy, But socially dead-Dot animantics. Poems are F.U.B.U ( for us by us.)----ME |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
Jay stop beating yourself up...I'm not worth it. This poem had nothing to do with you so do me a favor and STOP IT!!!!! "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
*bump* "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hey, the sisters are fighting..that's not good Why is it that you feel so lonely? Maybe it's up to you not to be lonely. Open up to others...you know what i mean...thanks for the wonderful read, and quit fighting I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
Oh you know sister's they can't keep their mouths shut!! Younger sister's are just that way I guess. hehe Anyway as for the lonely part...it just is...I mean it's like it's my destiny or something...no matter how much I open up to someone the further away they become. And I know it's not because I smell bad, because I take a shower twice a day, but like I said maybe its just my destiny. "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
this was a great poem. I think we all go through this at one point in our live. That's prolly why I wrote this... Have to Be One Learn to Accept Alone May Never Find Another Lover May well Spend The rest of My nights Alone Finding Comfort Somehow Would seem So Simple But I can't Find It Peace of mind Alluding Me Got to Find Satisfaction Within Myself Be yourself, strong in your beliefs and it always gets better IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN" ~Hatebreed~ |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Hey Chic! remember me? Good poem...kinda sad  you gots all kinds of friends here, so, Chin up If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
Hello, Good but poem. I feel lonely and lost sometimes. Because of my disability my sister(younger) doesn't want to do many things with me sometimes. I cry in my room and look at her and go your not that lucky either, so thats how we all feel some point in our lifes. I guess.~*~Minna~*~ If I could walk I'd be glad..But I'm glad the way I am- ~*~me~*~ |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a really sad poem. We all have times that we feel lonely, but God loves you, and so do we! (ok, that's really corny, but it's true!) We're always here for you, and it seems that you have a great sister that's here for you, too! SO !!!!Best of luck! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
Tamma- Yea I remember you...it's nice ot see a familiar face. Thanx for ur replies and my sad lonely times just got worse...my sis moved to Chicago and my Dad got rid of 5 of my dogs so now I feel as though I am truely alone. Oh and thanks for being here for me. "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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