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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Sudden dread Feeling of Death riding On the wind as I read The letter from her Life gasping, ends Suddenly nothing Meaning gone from these friends Who were never there And I turn to see Why it is That all I can be Is sarrowful for loss of thee |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
The style of this poem is great. I liked it a lot. You write very well.....you should write more often!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Actually, I'm always writing something. See, I write poetry, short stories, (thousands of lines of code, that there is making me lose my sanity... *jots down idea for poem*...) and I'm working on a novel.. or a rather long short story. Glad you like it  and you'll prolly see a bit more of my stuff (and replies, has not had much time for that) soon cuase thanksgiving break is comin up *smiles*. MORE TIME!!!!"Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
I like it is a great. the feelings were sizzling....good job...cant wait to see more of your stuff ~ina~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
These seemed like some strong emotions. I liked the style that this was written in as well! Nice job on the poem."Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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