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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
I wrote this a little over a month ago when a situation came up that caused me to almost lose my best friend. I was a nervous wreck trying to get her back. I wrote this late one night while trying to figure out what to do. And don't worry...everything is fine now. Hope you all like it. Friends... When a friend fails a friend what does it mean? When two people who care about each other beyond what words can descibe, run into a wall...that they can't seem to get around or climb over...what do they do? Do they fall apart? Do they try to work it out? What? Will their friendship prevail? If it doesn't what does it mean? Was all the tears, joys, good times, hard times, and the time spent together nothing? What did it mean? If it meant something why can't they work it out? Why can't they show the other that they still care? Who's to blame? Is it one or the other...or both? If that friendship can fall apart what does that show? That nothing is invulnerable? That everything has a weakness...a point where nothing can save it? No matter how hard someone tries? That no matter how strong you think you are...you can still be thrown to the ground? Forced to leave someone you love? That no matter what kind of ground you think you are standing on...it can still give way and cause you to fall? Can two wrongs make a right? Can two people mend their broken hearts? Or will they drift so far apart that nothing can bridge the gap? What do they do then? Do they give up on each other? Let the other leave never to be seen again? Or does one wait for the other to make a move? Should one step out and be met by the other halfway? Can they ever be friends again? Or are they destined to become strangers? Only time will tell. niceguy "Don't take love for granted...once it's gone, it hurts." |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
Wow, that was really good! It reminds everyone that a great friendships and memories are not worth throwing away over a single mistake. Thanks for posting that, and keep up the great work!! (btw, glad to hear things are ok with your friend again!!  )~Sarah with the unknown comes no expectations in this i find my peace |
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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
Thanx a lot for the reply...glad that you liked it. Laters. niceguy "Don't take love for granted...once it's gone, it hurts." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. Like silver said, one mistake does not constitute for losing a great friendship. Glad you solved your differences!! Good luck!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
Thanx Dopey...your right, one mistake is not worth losing a friendship over. After goiing through this, hers and my friendship is stronger. Thanx for the reply and keep up your writing. Laterz. niceguy "Don't take love for granted...once it's gone, it hurts." |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
These are some great questions, as this went on I kept thinking more and more about the answers. Great thoughts and awesome job on getting me to think  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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