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The Song |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
Come a little closer and whisper in my ear. All those lonely words you long for me to hear. Can you see me crying all these lonely tears. That I have held back all these aching years. They come in a flood raging on and on. They continue until the break of dawn. Can you see me looking deep into your eyes? I see nothing in them and hear nothing, but your lies. I know not for it's been so long. Exactly how to love I remember not the song. "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Hey! This poem was extremely sad but all too familiar of a feeling to me. Great job! |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Great poem I hope had nothing to do with me If it did I will Go hide under a rock for about 20-30 years early to rise, early to bed, make a man healthy, But socially dead-Dot animantics. but socially dead. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey well i hope its not about jytree........ but nice poem all together.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
nice real nice. i really love it, havent really been through it but pretty close, song "Wonderwall" by Oasis San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
no, this poem isn't about Jay...me and sis both wrote this poem. It was just something that popped into our heads..!  ~*~SCG~*~ |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
chic...i gotta say this is a wonderful piece, and very heartbreaking...wonderfully penned! salma |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is well done. You know, I seem to really like poems written by two people, and you wrote this with your sister, right? Well, great work, I like it "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
Gee thanx sis!  Steal all the glory from me why don't you j/k. Thanx Lakewalker!!"Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
*bump* "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is sooooo sad  so much hurt is shown in this piece. i hope you get better. thanks for sharingI see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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