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niceguy
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since 2000-11-13

Posts 113
Sapello, NM, USA

0 posted 2000-11-14 06:51 PM

I wrote this at a low point in my life...after my ex and I broke up. Things are okay now but I just thought I'd share this. Hope you like it.

"Failing"

Failing, is that all I will ever do? All my life with do? Things begin to look up, then they come crashing down. I fight it with every ounce of strength I have, yet the end result seems to always be the same. Will my best ever be enough? Will I?

"Don't take love for granted...once it's gone, it hurts."

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

1 posted 2000-11-14 09:43 PM

confidence boy! geez im glad things are better, cause i HATE not believing in myself, it bugs me.. newho..keep up the great work

~!*DQ*!~

"A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else"

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

2 posted 2000-11-14 11:35 PM

This poem sounds a lot like me my life and I totally understand what it is saying.Keep ip the awsome work.
Lauren

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2000-11-15 03:59 PM

Glad things as well again niceguy. Keep it up and nice poem. I like your work, very true.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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niceguy
Member

since 2000-11-13

Posts 113
Sapello, NM, USA

4 posted 2000-11-16 11:13 AM

thanx for your reply and your concern. Means a lot. Laterz
niceguy

"Don't take love for granted...once it's gone, it hurts."

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

5 posted 2000-11-16 08:49 PM

Another one with great questions! I like how you write, it's very effective. Good job on this one

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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niceguy
Member

since 2000-11-13

Posts 113
Sapello, NM, USA

6 posted 2000-11-16 08:55 PM

thanx lakewalker. Glad that you liked it.
Everytime I go to write...it comes out as questions. Guess that's my style or something. Thanx for the reply.
niceguy

"Don't take love for granted...once it's gone, it hurts."

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