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Teen Poetry #3

Wait, I Will

Ender
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since 1999-12-08

Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA

0 posted 2000-11-15 09:01 PM

*note--i am really loving this style*

Wait, I will forever
Until the day we are together
Promises, I will keep
Dreaming of you in my sleep

Apart, we are
But not very far
It will come, that day
And apart we will not stay

That day, I long for
So much, it gives a sore
Being with you, I miss
Your long sweet kiss

Wait, I will
I love you still
Wide open, my heart
Lets give it another start

*Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender*

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2000-11-15 09:09 PM

Yea the style is cool. Great poem and i hope everything works out for you with the girl. Good luck pal!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-11-16 08:14 PM

I think I've seen you post one other poem in this style, and I like it. This poem is good, it tells how much you want to be with her. great job on it

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xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2000-11-16 10:37 PM

I like the style of this too! Great poem hun..very sweet!

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