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Ender
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0 posted 2000-11-15 09:01 PM


*note--i am really loving this style*

Wait, I will forever
Until the day we are together
Promises, I will keep
Dreaming of you in my sleep

Apart, we are
But not very far
It will come, that day
And apart we will not stay

That day, I long for
So much, it gives a sore
Being with you, I miss
Your long sweet kiss

Wait, I will
I love you still
Wide open, my heart
Lets give it another start



*Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender*

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1 posted 2000-11-15 09:09 PM


Yea the style is cool. Great poem and i hope everything works out for you with the girl. Good luck pal!



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Lakewalker
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2 posted 2000-11-16 08:14 PM


I think I've seen you post one other poem in this style, and I like it.  This poem is good, it tells how much you want to be with her.  great job on it < !signature-->

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[This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 11-16-2000).]

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3 posted 2000-11-16 10:37 PM


I like the style of this too! Great poem hun..very sweet!
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