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Teen Poetry #3

Please Forgive Me

tq_99
Junior Member

since 2000-11-14

Posts 45
Las Vegas, NM, US

0 posted 2000-11-14 01:04 PM

I always write poetry off hand, I never brainstorm it just comes to me and I write it down, this specific poem came to me after a very terrifying dream I had, and this poem is mostly self-explanatory:

  Please Forgive Me

Please forgive me because I didn't mean to
   I thought that it had only one not two
Please wake up, your really starting to scare me
I'm sorry I thought you were kidding
      when you said you couldn't see
I see the life coming out of you
      as you lay there and cry
I loved you so much I'm sorry I never told you
      I thought there was more time before
         heaven took it's hold on you

  - tq_99

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2000-11-14 04:08 PM

Wow this is so sad...you never know what twists and turns life is going to take so never assume you have another day to tell someone how you feel..cause you might just not...excellent poem...very heartfelt.

silvrduck
Member

since 2000-11-05

Posts 146

2 posted 2000-11-14 04:08 PM

It must have been a bad dream! Wow, very good poem though!! You're very talented, keep it up!

~Sarah

with the unknown comes no expectations
in this i find my peace

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-11-14 04:19 PM

Why are you having such bad dreams??? Good job on the poem though!

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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2000-11-14 05:57 PM

This was yet another good one. Like lake asked...why are you having bad dreams? Lot's of stress?
anyway hope things get well.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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