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tq_99 Junior Member
since 2000-11-14
Posts 45Las Vegas, NM, US |
Feelings I wait for the day that you may feel the same way Although it may never come a single effort is better than none I wisht that day would come quick so that a type of friendship we shall pick I'm tired of being confused and I wish that I could say I have nothing to lose But your friendship with me means more than you may never be able to see So as I continue to wait please consider the weight the decision may take for both of our sake - tq_99 |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hi! Welcome to the wonderful place we call Passions. I really liked this first post. You described your feelings very well. Great job!! And good luck. ~Carly A word is dead When it is said Some say, I say it just Begins to live That day. |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
Hey Tq, welcome to passions! Excellent first post!! Very expressive... and I totally understand! Hope everything turns out for the best  Take care, Sarah with the unknown comes no expectations in this i find my peace |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions This post was a wonderful entrance, it's very good. I look forward to reading more of your poems and seeing some replies "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Welcome to Passions! I'm glad that you decided to join our big family of friends! This is a very good first post. It's always difficult to have a friend that you are starting to feel more for. You describe the feelings well. Keep up the great work! PS-Check your e-mail! False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Welcome to passions!!! Excellent first post...i can really relate to this one! Its also great that you said "a single effort is better than none" because that is sooo true!! So many people are so scared and never want to risk getting hurt so never do anything about their feelings...your gutsy hun and you take the right approach to all of this...Great job! |
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tq_99 Junior Member
since 2000-11-14
Posts 45Las Vegas, NM, US |
I just wanted to say thank you to all of you for your nice warm welcoming and encouraging words, I'm looking forward to reading all of your work also. Bye. "Some say a rich man has it all but if he has no friends he is nothing" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to Passions! A great read and i lok forward to more!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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