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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
What do I do... What do I do when your not around? How do I get through the day? What do I do while you are so far away? How can I bring you closer? What do I do when my heart aches for you? How do I stop the pain? What do I do when your not around? I sit and wait for you. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
First of all Welcome to Passions!!!I hope that you enjoy your stay here... Good first poem...But why are you gonna sit around and wait for this person...Its not worth it...It just makes more pain...I wish you the best of luck with whatever you do... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Welcome to passions! This was an awesome first post, but like erin said, don't spend your life waiting, spend it living. great poem!  Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions Great job on your first post here! Each question made me think more about my own life, nicely done. I hope you come to enjoy it here and keep posting "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 11-13-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to Passions! This was a good first post. I hope you do not have to wait any longer and things work out for the best buddy. Post up more!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions NiceGuy! We are very happy you have decided to join our community of poetry friendship. This was a wonderful first post ... full of questions and longing. I hope to read more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets! (check your e-mail for a special message) Best wishes, /Kit |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! You ask very common questions in this poem...i loved it a lot. It was an excellent way to enter passions. Keep on writing! |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Welcome to Passions!! Enjoy your stay  . Nice first post, hope things work out for you....keep it up, smile Bel |
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tq_99 Junior Member
since 2000-11-14
Posts 45Las Vegas, NM, US |
Not bad bro., gettin along pretty good, keep up the good work. "Some say a rich man has it all but if he has no friends he is nothing" |
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