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IsGona
Senior Member

since 2000-07-14

Posts 723

0 posted 2000-07-15 12:15 PM

**A happy one for a change**
****************************

Stars sparkle
Moon
  Shines
I'd like to sit and
Watch the
  Sunrise

Cool is the wind
Alone with
  My heart
Dust on my
Shoes
Brush off my
Coat

Walkin' blues ain't bad
Goin' to
  Show the
   Way
Listen to
My feet
Sing a
Happy
  Song

The road is long
Time is a
  Passin'
Goin' to
Meet the
  Sun
Feel it's
  Warmth

Up another hill
Down into
  Another
   World
See it
All
Put another
Hole in my
  Shoes

Ramble on
Find a good
Woman
Live and die
Drink my
Fill

Well
I gotta
  Go
Whistle a
Tune
Write
Another
  Scene

Gotta find my
Shoes
Warm coat
Move along
Look for
Luck

There's the sun now
Big and
  Orange
Pack away my
Books
Time for
Something
  Real

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

1 posted 2000-07-15 03:11 PM

Hey, I am reading another one of your poems. Keep up the good work. I liked this poem very much.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

2 posted 2000-07-15 03:15 PM

Once again, a wonderful piece. I think that your work is unique in many ways! You are very talented and I look forward to seeing lots more from you. This poem holds a true meaning even behind the words and message it portrays, keep it up! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

~*~My fire is dead,it knew no pain; yet it is dead and I remain: All stiff with ice ashes lie;and they are dead, and I will die~*~

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-07-15 03:36 PM

i have to agree with you...about this being a happy poem...i enjoy reading your work...keep it up...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

4 posted 2000-07-15 11:38 PM

Very good! Keep it up!

*Krista Knutson*

"This above all: to thine own self be true,
And it must follow, as the night the day,
Thou canst not then be false to any man."

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

5 posted 2001-05-12 07:59 AM

I thought this was really cool!! I like it lots, and I'm glad it's a happy one. It just seemed....real, you know?

Luv ya lots Jay...

Jenn

"If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari

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