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Tia Junior Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 41massachusetts |
Red...the blood running down my wrists from the scars I've caused Red...the taste of death in my mouth that I'll soon know Red...the feel of pain in my heart that makes me want to die Red...the love that makes it all worth while that stops the pain from spreading... My theory is that I might die at any moment, the tragety is that I don't... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow........this poem caused an impact on me. Good job. I liked the extra touch with the red text too.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
okay, this poem scares me, please tell me its not what is really going on. it was a great poem tho. jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Wow..im with J on this one. Scary, and i hope this really isnt happening. But if it is my heart goes out to you. funny how red is related to so many sad things, but then roses are red huh? Funny.. Keep up the great work, and keep that chin up  ¤Kiley¤ "A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else" |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was a very dramatic piece and i liked it a lot..Great job hun..short and sweet. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, This poem is really good, thanks for sharing it with us! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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