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If I told you |
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~SwEEt_LiL_GirL~ Junior Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 21 |
If I told you all my secrets, will you keep them? If I told you what's in my heart, will you tell anyone? If I told you I would die if you left me, will you leave me? If I told you I couldn't of made it without you, will you laugh at me? If I told you we were friends from the first time we saw each other, will you deny it? I trust you with all that I can, I trust you with all my heart, Will you return the feeling? Will you Love me for me? I will always care for you, I will always love you, I will always be there for you. Will you return the feeling? |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I like this one!!!If you gave this to a certain person I dont think that they would refuse it...So give it to someone special to you...And see how they react...Good work too!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This one tells you thoughts well, I hope you find the answer to your question soon. And I hope it's the answer that you want  Good job on the poem!"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. These questions are common for people who really care about somebody along with the insecurity of not knowing whether the feeling is returned. Hopefully it is and good luck!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
Great poem, I really loved it. Well, I agree with Dopey, this is something that always happen to me, I mean I feel like so close to this person, but then questions and doubts overwhelms me and I seem to lose my mind. But you just have to believe in the other person, I mean I think that if this friend is so close to you, then he/she must feel the same way. So I hope you give this poem to people you love, I mean I agree with Erin, this poem really touches people so, try it. Bye, and good luck Your friend, Caz It's been raining since you left me. |
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