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Flashback Desire |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Flashback Desire: Skin shedding down with copper water. Mind rusting away eternally. If only things were as they were, As they were. Lusting over past rememberance. I'll miss it all so much. I just wish things were as they were, As they were.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
"I just wish things were as they were, As they were." I really liked that part because i often wish the same thing too...things arent often what they appear to be and that really sux so it just leaves you wishing...Great poem Dopey |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
awww Dopey I love it... i know i dont comment on all of your poetry, but i do read them...i just thought this one was especially worth commenting on!! thanx for the comments on mine!!! ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~ If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. |
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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
This is a good poem Dopey. Man have I wished that all things could be what they seem! Great work man. Keep on writing. niceguy |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Great poem dopey. i feel this way sometimes too. i loved it, awesome job  Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I liked the ending of this too, but don't live totally in the past. Good job on the poem "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well thanks on the comments on this poem and yea..........i do wish things were as they were......but i'm coping.....im moving on i guess in some odd sense or another. rock on I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Dopey, It's hard for me to find any time to write lately. Let alone to check out this forum, but whenever I do I always look for your posts. They always amaze and inspire me to write myself. This one is no exeption. Keep writting and I'll continue looking for your poems and try to comment as much as possible. IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN" ~Hatebreed~ "I am, who I am and what you think, I don't give a damn" Chilli Peppers |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow....hey that was pretty cool IsGona..... I surely did not know that I did that for anyone. Thanks bunches.....it helps me write more if i get boosts like that. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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