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apsara Member
since 2000-11-09
Posts 70 |
Scared I'm afraid of waking up one day Wondering how I came to be here Remembering I had different thoughts on someday Then and wishing I could just disappear I'm afraid of losing hope along the way Of giving up and falling too fast Afraid of everything people might say If I were to race and finish last People say I'm just too bold But they don't know I'm afraid to try To guide the plane that holds My destiny across the open sky I want to stay this way forever Full of promise, hopes and dreams I'm scared of what the future brings Being a failure is so inevitable it seems |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
That was beauitful! I loved it! I know how you feel tho. But I think you expressed yourself well, great job, kepp writing!! Luv, ~*~SweetStuff~*~ ~*~GoOd fRiEnDz ArE hArD 2 FiNd, HaRdEr 2 LeAvE, & iMpOsSiBlE 2 fOrGeT~*~tHe HaRdEsT tHiNg tO Do iS wAtCh tHe 1 U LuV, lUv sUm1 eLsE~*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
People say I'm just too bold But they don't know I'm afraid to try To guide the plane that holds My destiny across the open sky I want to stay this way forever Full of promise, hopes and dreams I'm scared of what the future brings Being a failure is so inevitable it seem so beautifully written, apsara just remember to hold onto those hopes and dreams and I promise you that you will never be alone in your feelings...no matter what the age, life is a road filled with joys and sorrows and learning how to accept each...to make the next more promising {{huggzz}} and  ~Wynter *I loved your words and am placing them in my library to remind me that someone young wrote something beautiful today...and shows so much promise for her future endeavors "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Welcome to Passions! I'm so glad that you decided to join our "family"! This is a very well-written poem. Everyone feels like this sometimes, especally as a teen. You describe the feeling well. Although it may seem as if you must fail, you do have the power to succeed. I hope you realize that. Keep up the great work! PS-Check your e-mail! False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey there. You're not alone..remember that. You're not alone. Great poem.. ~Carly |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
First of all, WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! How can you say that you are bound to fail? You can be whoever you want to be. keep that in mind. "Afraid of everything people might say If I were to race and finish last" What is there to be afraid of. You should be proud to finish at all. Some people don't even get to finish. So, pick yourself up from the ground and carry your head up high Thanks for the read. keep sharing < !signature--> I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR [This message has been edited by acire (edited 11-10-2000).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions Very well done on your first post here! This poem is very well expressed, the words flow great. Keep posting them for us and I hope you enjoy it here "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to Positions!! ......ok no....Passions. anyway.......i'm lame and bored sorry hehe. Great poem but a lot of negativity in this one. I think you oughta be happy! haha....but look....if you need an ear to aid you in your problems then I, along with others in this wonderful place, are willing to help!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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apsara Member
since 2000-11-09
Posts 70 |
Thanks to everyone for those heartwarming replies and the awesome welcome. I guess I'm facing a lot of uncertainties right now but its going to be okay. And Dopey, that was lame. Love, apsara |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Welcome to passions!!!I hope that you enjoy it here...Good work on your first poem here...I cant wait to see more!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well yes apsara......i am the lame one here at passions....yep.....javier the lame one...hehe....just call me "oh mighty lame one".........ok no...just call me Javier....or if you prefer dopey then be my guest. Anyway......ummmm.....ok yea that's about it..... lame one out *click* I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Hey, that was GREAT!! Really! Welcome to Passions, nice first post. I've thought like that too...lol.... okay keep up the writingBel |
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